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Thank God,
— Suman Pokhrel
Thank God,
This moment
जीवनका प्रत्येक पल मृत्युको सँघार टेक्दछु ।
Poetry that emerges from a poet’s mind becomes complete only when it enters into the reader’s sphere of comprehension.
A reader takes poetry deep within him or her by accommodating it within his/her range of consciousness. So there is a possibility that the poems are received and understood differently when they enter into readers’ sphere.
Before getting translated, a poem already gets shrunk or expanded within the ‘sphere of intellect’ of the translator in the original language, and it again gets shrunk or expanded within the ‘sphere of intellect’ of the translator in the target language.
Before getting translated, a poem already gets shrunk or expanded within the ‘sphere of intellect’ of the translator in the original language, and it again gets shrunk or expanded within the ‘sphere of intellect’ of the translator in the target language. Thus, in translation of poetry; there exists a possibility of components like imagination, art of wordplay, skill of constructing internal rhythm and expand of knowledge of the poet getting affected by the constraint and differentia of the translator.
A reader takes poetry deep within him or her by accommodating it within his/her range of consciousness.
Poetry emerging from a poet enters into the reader only when it comes within the readers’ 'sphere of intellect. A reader cannot take poetry by expanding it beyond his/her consciousness, rather can take by shrinking it within. Thus, there exists a chance of every poem getting changed while reaching every reader. This ‘getting changed’ is a form of ‘getting translated’, in a way. So, every assimilation of any poem is a translation.
Every morning I’m still alive.
An uneasy rhythm of life is more life like than an easy death.
I chose none to askchasing the fogs
I asked nonewhy life ends in ways uncertain.
The dream too thinks twice, to be seated on children's eyes.
Even if they (Children) try to pluck it,the thorn scorns itself all its life.
I wonder–never to return to them.
Once positioned on their(children's) lips,come out as a melodious lisp.
Even If they (children) fall during their play,the ground, mostly, does not even hurt them.
If they (children) smash, the flower vase assumes a smilewater forgets about its own colourlessness.
Let me not so much be lost in involvementsbeaming in my own yard.
Not so much be lost as would have Ever.
Not so much, so much be lost, just As I’d wake and be conscious.
Will you please go journeying till I come living a moment of life?
I'm bereft of poetry
Through years of my primecrazy about love.
How could it be wished
I wanted my heart to bloomand shelter a shadow of love
But I want to write poetry
I wanted to paint a picture,the canvass of my heart.
I might just end up writing again
I am tipsy after myI forget myself, world and all.
Ifbefore I erected a Taj Mahal.
May I discard the outer cover of time from the layers of poetry by immersing the poet in its entirety within me
I want the fever to grab me forever to be my fever
Poetry emerging from a poet enters into the reader only when it comes within the readers’ 'sphere of intellect.
Tonight, may I get so drunk in love thatI do not see any dreams!
How could it be wished
I am quite sure that poetry will live long with our generations to come.
Commands-if you're placed down below.
It's not as easy
In this vagueness,
I like desires like childrenknowing life.
What was wafting in the smoke of burning tires?
There exists a chance of every poem getting changed while reaching every reader. This ‘getting changed’ is a form of ‘getting translated’, in a way. So, every assimilation of any poem is a translation.
I salute my desires with a bow., mind would be empty just like me.
I've climbed up here holding the hilt of time's sword by driving it into my tender heart.
I am in no mood to write
I believed all along, just to see me sane.
May I discard the outer cover of time from the layers of poetry by immersing the poet in its entirety within me
Even after all that, each and every being here believe, that the rule of an autocrat cannot last long.
Haunted trees from the fringe of streets.
Lampposts look are sleeping face downwards or supine.
Creation does not cease just because there is darkness!
I would regard meanings given by others so far as refreshing boon,the pollen of my heart with loving aroma.
I shall not go out at all anyhow from here.
What heart touched is what is touchedwhere heart lived is what is lived.
I could not saythat supported their shacks.
I felt I was getting enragedlike them losing their dreams.
I was feeling like madtheir own destinations
Is freedom dearer than life? when life becomes difficult?
I asked my lifechose to escape me.
Still enveloped in a blanket of dreamsit was in a deep slumber.
The road kept coming, andcontinued going somewhere alone.
This evening, toohankering after his light.
May I exchange T.S. Eliot’s The Wasteland
Let us be honestif you convey my salute to Amrapali.
This momentglued to myths, history and stories.
When this flood blocks the roadto reach my destination.
Should I complete this poemmy room’s light out?
In how many mindswhom should I ask?
Which eyes should I look forunreasoned answer?
Without asking anybody’s adviceI turned myself insane.
You who are sitting before meor anything else!
I know you'll speak no truth at this time. the inaudible appeals of your heart.
The walls are releasingheat , and about to run away getting stuck to the man.
The experience knowsthat the rule of an autocrat cannot last long.
The lovers feel that they are contentis more powerful than all cravings for love and lust.
Having been ripped open and drained by the crowdwhich is about to perish.
I'm searching a hearta heart that's smooth, effervescent and clean.
I shall not go out at allanyhow from here.
This market speaking lifeof all people speaking together.
Man and woman cease to be humansonce they get lost into crowds.
Are people like market when they’re in groups?
all trees and birdswere seeing everything.
I had also readsome cracked expectations.
I’ve touched some sentencesand have kissed some words.
Eyes that obstruct the road can be removedbut what happens when hearts block the passage?
Do not thinkor evaporating like a cloud.
I’ve climbed up hereinto my tender heart.
Whether anybody comes to convince me or notarresting my chest.
May I splinter away from myselflive in each with perfection!
This MEwith complete ease.
May I discard the outer cover of timewithin me
May life remain enamored of its own charm
May the river of love always flow from its own lap
May my pain remain drunk singing its own love songs
(May) the dead body of agony remain asleepresting its head on a pillow of flowers.
May I free myself from the labyrinth of knowledge
May I pack all inventions in burlapsand hide them in corners of Einsteins’ brains.
May I free myself from the ever-pressing chestby leisurely hiding brain on hill summits.
May I take off clothes covering shame at the borderand run by wearing the rays of the sun.
May I create plain fields by collecting cloudsand bedeck them with arching rainbows.
Playing ball of windfacing the world.
May I exchange T.S. Eliot’s The Wastelandby tilling with the pen of desire.
Fell in love with these hearts and this soilthese houses, these walls and streets.
Every moment age is creeping up stealthily,like a candle that is flickering around.
Life is withering awaylike a candle that is melting down.
Life incinerates incessantly trying to smilepretending to be alive.
Death is shaping up slowly and quietlylike a candle that is flickering all night.
Neither my acts have wiped the woes ofhow can I bow my head in your adulation?
Neither my deeds contain any essencehow can I come close to you?
Tonight, let us exchange every part of our bodies and every space of our souls to each other.
The eyes hold tears for so long, let us fill it with love and passion.
I shall give you a song, and you fill melody in it.
Let us convert this night we are breathing together, to a bright morning.
Unaware about my surrounding, unconscious I live.
It’s not my wish to walk intoxicated; to live for never is not my choice.
A portion of life, every moment gets torn out of me hurting, and flees away.
Wishing to grab the life with nothingnessI am in oblivion.
Let my pains remain with me.
Let my pains remain with me, I won't utter, I express it not.
My heart itself is a wound,and hurts more if touched.
This ambiance of candlelight reminds of nights that traveled its way, in entangled embrace of yours and mine.
May I get melted in closeness and get blazed in embrace.
I wish me to cry for no reason in excess of love.
I wish me to vanish somewhere around here.
The feeling I groped assuming love was nothing but a fire.
Keep some fires burning in your heart; I would extinguish it if I could, or get myself engulfed with it.
I shall give you a song, and you fill melody in it.
I want to be everywhere of you.
“Strength of creative writing lies in the skill of handling words and articulating artistic expression of feelings.”
“In influencing write-ups, words seem to move despite residing still on paper.”
“In many a situation, the images that words hide while walking forth are the desired meaning of particular words rather than the word itself. Those words sing and dance by coming out of the paper.”
“Language is texture of images and music. We speak in images and rhythm, by taking help of words.”
“In literary translations, it is this very articulation of expressions that matters the most to bring home to the readers the full essence of the original text in question."
“Chance of source language influencing the target language and that of the translator intervening onto the style of original writer are major challenges in literary translation.”
“On translating text into the new language as it is in source language, there is a chance of it being emerged as an absurd sentence in the target language making no sense at all. In the attempt to make the translation meaningful to the target language, there exists a risk of the original work getting meddled by the translator’s style.”
“Literary translation is not merely an act of picking words from one language and keeping it by dipping in the vessel of another language. Those words need to be rinsed, washed, carved and decorated as much as possible.”
Poetry emerging from a poet enters into the reader only when it comes within the readers’ 'sphere of intellect.
A reader cannot take poetry by expanding it beyond his/her consciousness, rather can take by shrinking it within.
There exists a chance of every poem getting changed while reaching every reader. This ‘getting changed’ is a form of ‘getting translated’, in a way. So, every assimilation of any poem is a translation.
Before getting translated, a poem already gets shrunk or expanded within the ‘sphere of intellect’ of the translator in the original language, and it again gets shrunk or expanded within the ‘sphere of intellect’ of the translator in the target language.
In translation of poetry; there exists a possibility of components like imagination, art of wordplay, skill of constructing internal rhythm and expand of knowledge of the poet getting affected by the constraint and differentia of the translator.
